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The first ten people to comment on this journal, I will put their avatar and the 3 deviations I like the most from their gallery on the list!
 If you comment, you have to make a journal like this and do the same thing, putting me in the first spot
The idea of this is not to get a free feature, it is to spread art around for everyone! if you don't re-do it you will be taken off the list.
  Pretty simple, no? And to follow up on what my friend :iconcaptdedeyes: did, I'm also doing 5 deviations instead of 3! I'm also doing the blurb thing, but that was a given. I'd do that even if I hadn't seen his.
Speaking of which, let's kick it off with him!
  1. :iconcaptdedeyes: EndangeredCDs:
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You know what I like? Cartoons. And also Kirby.
CD had managed to do both in a way that I enjoy and respect. That Susie drawing is adorable by the way. He seems to have a knack for ambitious portrait scenes with lots of stuff happening in them. And his skill in making backgrounds is impressive as well. If anything to add, I'd like to seem him tackle a different art style more often...something like the lineless Kirby characters he did a while back, like this Meta Knight at the end. 

  2. :iconjenni-no-mercy: Joenomrc's:
Tg War Rap Battle: Kim vs The Magician
It's time for a TG War Rap Battle!
Today's match: 
The Mysterious Magician!
Vs
The Charming Spellcaster, Kim Kit!
Begin!
Magician: The curtain shall rise, let the show begin!
I'm more than your average Las Vegas magician
But when a rival approaches, I gonna rock their world
I'd knock you out, but I don't hit little girls
I've dished out more Tgs on hundreds alone
Let's compare that to the man who got zapped by smartphone
Thinking that a stick like you can beat me is joke
And like my cigarette, You'll go up in smoke!
Kim: Let me make this clear, I'm not known for being nice
I spit some mystic disses, so you better think twice
Your magic is laughable, that outfit is trash
With your weird black hat and your Stalin mustache!
You act so tough, but we both know that's crap
Only guy to get zapped when he got Bitch-slapped
You always seem to be the target, and yet you never attack
So if you don't want to be zapped, leave and never come back!
Magician: Nice try Mr. Purple-hair, you need to
  Tg War- Jake and Gem's Excellent Adventure
Location: Random City
The Alliance of Jake Stormer and Geminim (And Joenomrc....Sort of)
Date: TBA
Time: 1:01 PM Central Time
   "Joe, look!" Jake Stormer pointed in awe at the sky. His ally, Joenomrc, was walking with him as they tried to enjoy their small break from the war. It was hard though. With Aero disowning them from the Attack Dogs, even after the two battled on the atoll with all of their willpower and courage, Joe and Jake got off the atoll, deciding to take a small break. Joe wanted to go home right away, but Jake had other plans. The young writer took them to some city, where Jake's favorite band was playing. While walking to their hotel room to get ready, Jake noticed something flying above them. Joe looked up, and almost fainted.
    "Jake, those are-"
    "Tg missiles. I know." Jake wrote in a portal and the two hopped in as fast as they could. They ended up in their hotel room. The impressive room was m
  Tg War- Joe Reflects on Herself
Location: Joenomrc's Home in North Dakota
The meeting of JessWithSuccess
Date: 03/11/16
Time: 5:41 PM Central
    "Finally! We're back and we never have to deal with Central's bull again!" Jake Stormer yelled out as he and Joenomrc entered the northern home of the fedora-wearing teenager. After a long and stressful time on the Bikini Atoll, the two were ready for a well deserved meal, shower, and anything else they could think of. Jake went straight for Joe's fridge while Joe decided that a shower was the priority.
    "Jake, make sure that you don't eat everything in there. I'm still the one who pays for food, water, and practically everything else here." Joe walked down to the basement level, since that's where his shower and bedroom is. He walked into his bathroom and was appalled by the mirror. It was covered in what looked like Cola. Joe sighed in frustration.
    "Okay, Jake is using the guest bathroom from now on." Joe grabbed a rag from the drawer
  The Witches of The Four Moons-Part One 
Prelude
        Hello! Uh, well if you're reading this, then I'm still alive! That's always a positive. Either way, I'm guessing that you're wondering why I'd be dead. Well, that's a very long story. But, before I tell you everything, you'll need some background information. First off, my name is Joseph Watson. Before this whole thing happened to me, which you'll figure out later about when I say "thing", I was a normal high school boy with normal high school looks. I was always a fan of keeping my brown hair long and shaggy. I had freckles that covered my cheeks, which were pretty pale. But I digress. You're not here to talk about that stuff. You just want to here about how this sophomore ended up being a part of a world of magic and mayhem! Well, let's get to that part then....
   Chapter One: My "Normal" Day Can't Stay Normal
        I opened my eyes groggily
  WOTFM- Part TwoChapter Two- I learn to NOT trust Nurses
    I don't know what exactly happened to me, but I remember waking up in a strange room. I felt incredibly weak, my body sore in every way imaginable. My eyes hurt like they had acid poured into them as I tried looking down at my body. I was in a white hospital gown, a few wires connecting to my body to read my vitals. I turned to see Aunt Heidi, sitting in a chair by my side, a tissue in her hands. Next to her stood Darwin, trying to comfort her.
    "He'll be alright, Miss Watson. He's a tough guy. I promise." He said, even though in his tone spoke louder. He was just as worried. I tried to sit up, which got Aunt Heidi's attention.
    "Joseph! Oh my goodness!" She stood up and kept me from sitting up any more. "Don't move too much! You need to rest, okay hun?"
    I nodded and relaxed a little bit. Darwin explained what happened. Apparently, he was rushing behind me beca

I feel as if I'm a bit biased in my choices, heh heh.
But yeah, Joe, you're a great writer. Certainly better than I am, and I enjoy your characterization and style of dialogue. If there is one thing I might add, and it's definitely a nitpick, it's to characterize the setting just a bit. Keep up the great work!
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I have a couple things similar to this, if that works, if it doesn't then please don't include me. I don't want to delete my top journal and then repost it again, and I don't want any more loose ends to tie up.